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Trying to forget all those fucking LIES you whispered to me.

Your arms were wrapped around me,
                                            Holding me tight in a false embrace.
I could feel your hot breath whispering in my ear,
                                            Telling me you needed me here with you.

At that moment,
My world was perfect.

Feeling you close,
             Feeling your touch,
                           Feeling your soft kisses on my neck…

              Fake as it all may have been.

I believed your lies just so I’d never have to leave your goddamn arms.

Look where it got me.
                        NOWHERE.

You and your lips of deceit almost did me in.

It
   all
       spiraled
                downward, as we pretended to be happy.

None of us ever were.



                                         Not until now.
©2005-2009 ~XxCutxUpxAngelxX
:iconxxcutxupxangelxx:

Author's Comments

Bad nite.
Got to thinkin.
It's all good now tho. Got the anger and stuff out, now I think I'm ok again lol.
Comments and critique welcome!! :)

I thought I'd experiment and screw around with the placement and stuff. I like it. :shrug:

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:iconzeldaconnetion:
very deep i like it

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Sincerely,
Saeiane,
Mephistopheles D. Grimm,
D. H. The Second.
:iconemptyxreturns:
awesome last two lines :)

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do you think that someone paints your mirror
:iconxxcutxupxangelxx:
Thanks so much! :glomp:

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Grant Me One Last Wish, Play Russian Roulette As We Kiss.
I'll Be Your Cheap Novelty, Blow Your Brains Out On Me.
Tell me your fantasies, I'll make you believe, That I really care.

Rebecca Louise :blackrose:
:iconrayne-way:
Wow O.O Very deep, I feel like slitting my wrists now XD

Kidding, and great work :thumbsup:

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<T h i s I s T h e C o l l a p s e>

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:iconlovedreamerpeach:
This is amazing! I love the emotion here. Anger, saddness, feeling of betrayal. Very nicely done!
:iconxxcutxupxangelxx:
Thank you soo much! :)

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Grant Me One Last Wish, Play Russian Roulette As We Kiss.
I'll Be Your Cheap Novelty, Blow Your Brains Out On Me.
Tell me your fantasies, I'll make you believe, That I really care.

Rebecca Louise :blackrose:
:iconxxcutxupxangelxx:
uhhh....lol......ok thanks. :)

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Grant Me One Last Wish, Play Russian Roulette As We Kiss.
I'll Be Your Cheap Novelty, Blow Your Brains Out On Me.
Tell me your fantasies, I'll make you believe, That I really care.

Rebecca Louise :blackrose:
:iconpepsimatty13:
I'm encouraged to reply with my 'Devious Thoughts"
:ninjabattle:

That is me above fighting the dark lord and riding the earth of evil throughout unmeantionable places. As you can clearly see, the white guy is the USA, and the black guy is minority countrys

EARTH: The biggest place in the world!

Anywho back to the poem...

Anybody
Can
Indent
To
Make
Things
Look
Good.

But the poem spoke to me, it sounded like "Sweet Child O' Mine" by Guns N Roses... then I realized I had music playing...
:popcorn:

But it was good, seeing I an being forced to reply to this by gunpoint.... help me ............... *BANG*









The End?
:iconpepsimatty13:
I'm encouraged to reply with my 'Devious Thoughts"
:ninjabattle:

That is me above fighting the dark lord and riding the earth of evil throughout unmeantionable places. As you can clearly see, the white guy is the USA, and the black guy is minority countrys

EARTH: The biggest place in the world!

Anywho back to the poem...

Anybody
Can
Indent
To
Make
Things
Look
Good.

But the poem spoke to me, it sounded like "Sweet Child O' Mine" by Guns N Roses... then I realized I had music playing...
:popcorn:

But it was good, seeing I an being forced to reply to this by gunpoint.... help me ............... *BANG*


Good wurk becca a.k.a. cutupangels or sumthin like that






The End?

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